10:31
am (PST) January 30, 2002
How
Did Bush Do? - 2002 State of the Union
Comments on rhetorical effectiveness
While
not as dramatically anticipated as Bush's previous address to
a joint session of Congress days after the September 11, attacks,
the 2002 State of the Union address was nevertheless eagerly
awaited as a test of how much Bush has truly evolved as a leader.
Pundits,
political analysts, and the American public have all weighed
in, giving the President high marks for his performance. Several
polls indicate a vast majority of Americans approved of the
policies espoused by Bush in the address and believe he did
an excellent job.
What
these polls don't tell us is why Bush was so effective. Surely,
his current popularity did much to bolster the overall impression
of his speech but communications experts will argue that how
he presented himself and his ideas were also an important factor
in Bush's effectiveness. For business professionals interested
in improving their own communication skills and leadership abilities,
a study of Bush's rhetorical effectiveness provides significant
value.
To
better understand Bush's success, this piece will examine some
of the strengths and weaknesses in Bush's 2002 State of the
Union from a communications perspective, offer suggestions as
to how the speech could have been more effective and then briefly
glean lessons that executives and managers can use to improve
their own business communication.
What
Bush Did Right
Content and Language
Bush
entered the Capitol with a tremendous advantage, extraordinary
popularity and a cause that has united American like no other
since World War II. Bush wisely capitalized on this and turned
it into one of the many strengths of his speech. He devoted
roughly two thirds of his speech to the war on terrorism and
homeland security. Using forceful words, he impressed upon Americans
the importance of this battle and what it will mean for the
future of the country. The most obvious example of this forceful
language frequent was the frequent use of the word "evil."
Made much of by the media, this was in all probability, a conscious
decision by Bush to clearly delineate his belief that there
are only two sides to this battle and, more important, make
it easier to cast those who are not with us as enemies and justifiable
targets for military action. Naming Iran, Iraq and North Korea
was a bold move that could have backfired. Instead, Bush's framing
of the war as essentially dualistic made the naming of the "others"
a natural and necessary part of his description of the Administration's
war efforts.
It
is interesting to note that in spite of Bush's statements in
the 2000 presidential debates that foreign policy must be conducted
with humility, there was no humility in his phrasing. This was
subtly but powerfully demonstrated in one sentence: "Terrorists
who once occupied Afghanistan now occupy cells at Guantanamo
Bay." This specific reference to the controversial prison
made it clear to critics, primarily the European Union, that
Bush feels there is nothing to hide or be ashamed of regarding
the treatment of these individuals. He later evinced America's
willingness to proceed without multilateral support when he
stated that:
We will work closely with our coalition to deny terrorists and
their state sponsors the materials, technology and expertise
to make and deliver weapons of mass destruction…yet time
is not on our side. We will not wait on events while dangers
gather. I will not stand by as peril draws closer and closer.
This
is not the diplomatic language that is usually used by presidents
when dealing with international affairs and certainly not language
that the international community is used to. According to Slate.com's
roundup of the international press the day after the address,
The international press was uniformly shocked at Bush's "escalation
of rhetoric". But as they also noted, the address was for
domestic consumption and domestic audiences reacted very favorably.
A truism of the American psyche is that the public uniformly
approves of forcefulness and purpose in their leaders even if
they don't agree with the specific actions. (Note: these words
could also have been crafted to highlight Bush's sense of urgency
in order to make a case for military tribunals that have been
hugely controversial, even here at home.)
After
the war on terrorism, the most important thing on American's
minds is the economy. As pundits have pointed out over and over
again, Bush the Younger is intent on not repeating the mistakes
of his father who enjoyed tremendous popularity after the Gulf
War only to lose the presidency to Bill Clinton's laser focus
on the economy ("It's the economy, stupid.") Accordingly,
the next biggest chunk of the state of the union dealt with
economic issues. Here Bush was treading in less friendly waters.
Many of his proposals for economic stimulus and the budget are
strongly opposed by the Democrats. Bush's answer to this dilemma
was very crafty. By linking his divisive economic proposals
to one universally popular theme, jobs, Bush was able to get
a rhetorical lift. While specific legislation was greeted by
predictable standing ovations by the Republicans and notable
silence on the Democratic side of the aisle, every reference
to "jobs" prompted both sides of the aisle to rise
and applaud heartily making it appear as if Bush enjoyed bipartisan
support on much more than he really did. According to a CBS
News poll, 74% of Americans who watched the speech felt that
Government will be able to work together as opposed to 62% of
those who didn't watch the speech.
Bush's
explicit emphasis on bipartisianship was also unprecedented
and effective. Some of the most sustained applause in the Chamber
occurred when Bush made special note of Democrats, most notably
Ted Kennedy, who had worked on the education bill.
The
other notable issue of content in the President's speech was
Enron. The timeliness and sheer magnitude of the attention the
company's collapse has been given by the media meant that the
issue could not be ignored. Yet, the Bush adminstration's potentially
damaging ties to Enron made this perhaps the trickiest element
of the address. In this instance, Bush benefited from tradition.
The State of the Union has evolved from a simple letter sent
to Congress detailing, exactly that, the state of the union
into the most important presidential address of the year which
is the launching point for the president's themes and vision.
Specificity is not required and in fact, presenting "laundry
lists" of legislation is often viewed negatively. As Karen
Hughes, Bush's Communications Director, pointed out the morning
before the address that it would be inappropriate for Enron
to be mentioned specifically in a speech such as the State of
the Union. Bush successfully achieved this balancing act using
two strategies. First, he clearly called for new corporate responsibility
and stricter accounting standards. When all was said and done,
this is what Americans wanted to hear more than condemnations
of specific parties. Second, he wove this call seamlessly into
a broader call for economic security in retirement simultaneously
addressing the essential issues without giving it undue and
potentially damaging prominence. This two-pronged approach was
clearly effective. The CBS poll reported that 66% of Americans
who watched the speech felt he didn't need to say more than
he did.
Finally,
much has been said of the presidential tradition of introducing
specific individuals who exemplify the theme and vision of the
speech. First attributed to Reagan, this custom is remarkably
effective in bringing abstract values home. Without repeating
what has already been said about this technique, it is interesting
to note that Bush invited and singled out Doctor Sima Samar,
Afghanistan's new minister of women's affairs as one of these
individuals. This is a clear and brilliant appeal to women voters
who are often at odds with the President. (It is also interesting
that, with the exception of one truly oblique reference to the
dignity of every life near the end of the speech, there was
no mention of the abortion issue, a fixture in every State of
the Union since Reagan.)
What
Bush Could Have Done Better
Delivery
As
President of the United States, Bush has access to the best
minds and writers in the country as well as comprehensive polling
data that gives him a unique knowledge of his audience and what
they want to hear. What the office does not automatically confer
upon its holders is charisma and presence. That he must develop
on his own and it has been one of Bush's biggest challenges
since entering national politics. Since September 11, he has
developed tremendously in this regard with moments of rhetorical
brilliance, e.g. the "bullhorn moment." His speech
on September 20 to a joint session of Congress was the best
he's given delivery wise and raised the bar. Initially, the
beneficiary of low expectations, Bush is now judged by higher
standards. In general he met those expectations. He was relaxed
and confident and as mentioned above, his forceful delivery
complemented his forceful language and was well received by
listeners.
He
also handled the constant interruptions for applause better
than he has in the past. These ovations, while traditional and
affirming for the unity of the nation wreak havoc with speeches.
Stirring rhetoric must often build up to a crescendo to be truly
effective. Constant "spontaneous" outbursts of applause
disrupt the flow and momentum. Bush's September 20 speech suffered
from this acutely. Bush's chief speechwriter, Michael Gearson's
moving language lost much of the power that is only truly realized
after reading a text of the speech.
In
general, Bush's speeches have always read better than they sounded.
He has problems "punching" his phrases and placing
the correct intonation and emphasis on specific words to give
the sentence the full impact. For example, in the first sentence
of the speech, "As we gather tonight, our nation is at
war, our economy is in recession, and the civilized world faces
unprecedented dangers. Yet the state of our union has never
been stronger." Bush rushed into the second sentence compromising
its tremendous impact. This is a great juxtaposition of language
and received sustained applause. Yet, a meaningful pause before
delivering the "kicker" would've heightened its impact
into a truly great rhetorical moment.
Another
problem with Bush's delivery of this speech was the inconsistency
in tone. There were two Bushes on display that evening. One
was the intense and focused Bush that we've seen since September
11. The other was the folksy, irreverent Bush that we got to
know during the campaign. While both styles are effective on
their own, they were glaringly discordant with each other in
the same speech. Ironically, each "Bush" could've
benefited from the other. Bush's strength and relative sternness
is obviously sincere and appropriate to his topic but at times,
he seems overly concerned with "dignity." The warmth
and humor that the "other" Bush demonstrates would
enhance this seriousness by making him more accessible. Likewise,
the "folksy, humorous" Bush can sometimes seem flip
and sarcastic and some of the decorum we see in the "serious"
Bush would counterbalance this impression giving Bush the "gravitas"
that he needs during these times.
Lessons Learned
From
Bush's success and weaknesses, business communicators can see
the value of:
-
Forcefulness and decisive language when leading through a
crisis.
- Co-opting
your opponents by linking your agenda to theirs.
-
Dealing with controversial topics by addressing the underlying
needs they prompt.
-
Maintaining a consistency of tone and balancing seriousness
with warmth.
Talking Points
State of the Union - 2002
Strengths
- Bush
use forceful and evocative language that clearly defined the
stakes and the sides of the war
- He
concentrated on what Americans wanted to hear, the war against
terrorism and the economy.
- Through
the constant references to jobs he forced to Democrats to
visually endorse his economic policies.
- He
successfully dealt with the "Enron" issue by dealing
with the underlying issues of corporate responsibility and
accounting standards and avoided "naming names."
He also cleverly placed the issue in the context of his larger
vision of security.
Weaknesses
- Bush's
perennial problems of intonation and emphasis slightly compromised
the effectiveness of the speech.
- The
inconsistency of tone was jarring. A better balance of the
two different Bushes, the stern commander and chief and the
folksy, humorous guy next door, would result in a unique and
warm signature style that would serve Bush well throughout
his political career.
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and 2004 State of the Unions.
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